Unknowing and oblivious
to what lies in wait:
A cruel, malicious plot
in which you are the bait.
Whether it is random,
or planned and full of hate;
An unexpected accident,
or all laid out by fate;
You're the one he's chosen,
you're the one he'll use.
You're the one he'll leave to die,
beaten and abused.
As you traverse the alley,
evil makes its mark.
You don't see or hear a thing
but a shadow in the dark.
Like a hungry predator,
he stalks and then he pounces.
You scream and then fall silent;
He laughs and then denounces,
"I don't know why she did it,
or what was in her head.
She pulled the trigger once,
then again and she was dead."
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Okay, so. I didn't really finish this, but I'm ending it there. It's up to you to interpret the poem and what happens in the end.
If you want to know what is happening, then keep reading. A man randomly kidnaps a woman off the street, and will use her in his plan to cause an explosion, killing a bunch of people. Hence the title, carnage. Why the man wanted to kill a bunch of people? I didn't quite get that far.  |
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Opinions are immunity to being told you're wrong, Rock, paper, and scissors; They all have their pros and cons.
-The Only Thing Worse Than Beating A Dead Horse Is Betting On One ~ Relient K
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Know how much I want to show you you're the only one.
Like a bed of roses, there's a dozen reasons in this gun.
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Opinions are immunity to being told you're wrong, Rock, paper, and scissors; They all have their pros and cons.
-The Only Thing Worse Than Beating A Dead Horse Is Betting On One ~ Relient K
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Know how much I want to show you you're the only one.
Like a bed of roses, there's a dozen reasons in this gun.
The most important thing in my life!
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Opinions are immunity to being told you're wrong, Rock, paper, and scissors; They all have their pros and cons.
-The Only Thing Worse Than Beating A Dead Horse Is Betting On One ~ Relient K
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And it's happened once again
I'll turn to a friend
Someone that understands
Sees through the master plan
But everybody's gone
And I've been here for too long
To face this on my own
Well I guess this is growing up
-Blink 182-
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Know how much I want to show you you're the only one.
Like a bed of roses, there's a dozen reasons in this gun.
^^
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And it's happened once again
I'll turn to a friend
Someone that understands
Sees through the master plan
But everybody's gone
And I've been here for too long
To face this on my own
Well I guess this is growing up
-Blink 182-
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Those who dream by day are aware of many things which escape those who only dream by night.
There's nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein.
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Know how much I want to show you you're the only one.
Like a bed of roses, there's a dozen reasons in this gun.
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